You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of visit Write a letter to your friend .in your letter Explain the important event Apologies for situation Suggest a new arrangement
Dear Lisa,
Hi there! Thanks for your
last
letter. Sorry, I have not written you
for a long time.BecauseChange preposition
to you
,
I had many problems with work. So, I was busy.
I am writing to tell you about our arrangement.I was going to visitRemove the comma
apply
in
your country. Change preposition
apply
However
, an important event that caused the change of plans, I will not be going to go in Canada. Because,
the day is a family member's milestone. Our many relatives are gathering here.I think, if I go to yours, they upset me. Remove the comma
apply
Therefore
, our plan changed.
For this
, I would like to apologize about
Change preposition
for
this
event. Please, forgive me for it
. Correct pronoun usage
this
However
, if you agree with my suggestion, I will visit next week. I hope, our meeting will be more enjoyable than schedule
. I would be gratefulWrong verb form
scheduled
,
if you could reply Remove the comma
apply
my
letter.
Sorry, but I have to finish. I look Change preposition
to my
forwad
to hearing from you. See you soon in Canada.
Best wishes,
Zarina.Correct your spelling
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coherence cohesion
Consider organizing your ideas more clearly, each paragraph should contain a single idea that is expanded upon.
coherence cohesion
Starting with a proper greeting and ending with a suitable closing adds cohesiveness to the letter. Make sure to use these appropriately.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each idea transitions smoothly into the next, using linking words or phrases to maintain flow.
task achievement
Ensure the response directly addresses each point listed in the task. Specify the important home event and provide more details to clarify the situation.
task achievement
Keep the tone polite and friendly, but also formal enough for an apology and a rescheduling request.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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