The diagram below shows the process of using water to produce electricity

The diagram below shows the process of using water to produce electricity
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The picture illustrates the production of
water
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-based
electricity
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with assistance from the hydroelectric generator. It can be seen that the process of making
electricity
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from
water
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consists of six processes.
First,
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the heat from the sun makes sea
water
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evaporate and create clouds.
Then
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, the cold temperatures make the cloud
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until it precipitates into the
water
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droplets, which will be stored in the dam. Afterwards, the dam’s door (valve) will be opened or closed to send the
water
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into the turbines, once the
water
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volume is adequate. In the
turbine
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the
water
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will be converted into
electricity
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and is delivered directly to be stored
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tower. Meanwhile, the remaining
water
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from the conversion process is pumped back
to
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the reservoir through a pump machine.
Subsequently
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, the
electricity
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flows from the towers to the transformer station via the cables, before is distributed to several facilities,
such
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as factories, schools, hospitals, and houses.
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