The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The line chart shows how the
prices
of
copper
,
nickel
, and
zinc
changed each month in 2014.
Copper
and
nickel
prices
went down
overall
,
while
zinc
prices
went up slightly.
Nickel
had the most significant price fluctuations between months. In January 2014,
nickel
prices
increased by 6% compared to the previous month, which was higher than
copper
(2%) and
zinc
(1%).
However
,
nickel
prices
dropped to 1% by March and reached a low of -3% by June. The changes for
copper
and
zinc
were less dramatic, with
zinc
seeing a 3% increase in February before a downward trend for the first half of the
year
.
Copper
prices
also
fell, mostly staying around 1% to -1%. In the second half of the
year
,
nickel
prices
continued to decline, except for a 1% increase
at the end
of the
year
.
Copper
prices
remained stable
around
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1% from July onwards, with a small increase in December.
Zinc
prices
had a slight drop of 0.5% for most of the latter part of the
year
, followed by a surge of 2% in December, which was the highest point reached among all the minerals’
prices
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words prices, copper, nickel, zinc, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
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