The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The line chart shows how the
prices
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of
copper
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,
nickel
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, and
zinc
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changed each month in 2014.
Copper
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and
nickel
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prices
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went down
overall
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,
while
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zinc
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prices
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went up slightly.
Nickel
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had the most significant price fluctuations between months. In January 2014,
nickel
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prices
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increased by 6% compared to the previous month, which was higher than
copper
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(2%) and
zinc
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(1%).
However
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,
nickel
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prices
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dropped to 1% by March and reached a low of -3% by June. The changes for
copper
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and
zinc
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were less dramatic, with
zinc
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seeing a 3% increase in February before a downward trend for the first half of the
year
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.
Copper
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prices
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also
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fell, mostly staying around 1% to -1%. In the second half of the
year
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,
nickel
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prices
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continued to decline, except for a 1% increase
at the end
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of the
year
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.
Copper
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prices
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remained stable
around
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1% from July onwards, with a small increase in December.
Zinc
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prices
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had a slight drop of 0.5% for most of the latter part of the
year
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, followed by a surge of 2% in December, which was the highest point reached among all the minerals’
prices
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words prices, copper, nickel, zinc, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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