The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows the
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numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
visitors
to the Caribbean Use synonyms
island
from 2010 to 2017.
All and all,the total number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Use synonyms
island
has been increasing throughout the period between 2010 and 2017. In Use synonyms
details
, the Fix the agreement mistake
detail
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numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
visitors
who stay on Use synonyms
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island
is higher than the Add an article
the island
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numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
visitors
who stay on Use synonyms
cruise
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ships
in previous years.
Beginning in 2010, the Use synonyms
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numbers
of total Fix the agreement mistake
number
visitors
continued to grow until 2017.And the number of people who chose to stay on the Use synonyms
cruise
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ships
is lower than the number of people who chose to stay on Use synonyms
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island
until the middle of 2015. Add an article
the island
Then
in the middle of 2015,two lines Linking Words
wore
crossed, Correct your spelling
were
it
means that from Correct pronoun usage
which
then
on there were more Linking Words
visitors
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stay
on the Wrong verb form
staying
cruise
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ships
than Use synonyms
that
on the Correct pronoun usage
apply
island
.
The line of the Use synonyms
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numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
visitors
who stay on Use synonyms
cruise
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ships
, Use synonyms
it
began at 0.25 Correct pronoun usage
apply
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millions
and Change to singular
million
it
fluctuated until 2012, Correct pronoun usage
apply
then
continued to rise to 1.5 Linking Words
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millions
after 2012. And the other line of the Change to singular
million
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numbers
of people Fix the agreement mistake
number
chose
to stay on Correct pronoun usage
who chose
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island
, Add an article
the island
it
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apply
start
at 0.75 Wrong verb form
started
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millions
, and Change to singular
million
rising
to 1.5 Wrong verb form
rose
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millions
Change to singular
million
by
2013, it stayed the same Change preposition
in
in
2013 to 2015.It fell in 2016 and recovered to 1.5 million by 2016
In summary, the total Change preposition
from
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visitors
increased by 45 Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
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millions
over the 8 years period.Change to singular
million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words numbers, visitors, island, cruise, ships, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 8 times.
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