The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. IELTS Bar Chart
The pie chart illustrates the changes
about
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in
employment
in the UK in
1988 and 2012.
As can be seen from the pie chart, the most significant feature is the increase in the percentage of Change preposition
between
male
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the male
workforce
, only minimal changes can be seen over the period of 14 years , from 53% full time
and 6% part
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part-time
time
work force
in 1998 to 47% full Correct your spelling
workforce
time
and 7% in 2012.
More than half of the employment
workforce
belongs to the full
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full-time
time
male sector, with 53% in 1988 and this
proportion remained the largest although
there was a marginal decline with
6% in 2012.
In the same period , the percentage of female Change preposition
of
full
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full-time
time
workforce
was about 22% in 1988 which than
declined to 20%. Replace the word
then
By contrast
, the figure for part
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part-time
time
female employee
increased from 19% in 1988 to 26% Fix the agreement mistake
employees
2012
.
In conclusion, it is quite evident that the male Change preposition
in 2012
full
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full-time
time
and part
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part-time
time
workforce
comprises more than half of the employment
workfoce
despite the marginal variations. Correct your spelling
workforce
On the other hand
, although
female
Correct article usage
the female
full
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full-time
time
work force
illustrates Correct your spelling
workforce
the
upward trend Correct article usage
an
but
it just comprises Remove the conjunction
apply
the
quarter of the Correct article usage
a
employment
workforce
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