The graph shows the changing patterns of access to modern technology in homes in the UK (expressed in percentage terms).
The line graph compares the fluctuations (measured in percentage) in
accessibility
of digital devices at home in the UK in four different periods of time.
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the accessibility
Overall
, three technological sources were considered including CD player, mobile phone, and computer. Even though the use of the internet was not available at the start of the period, it became reachable during the years.
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To begin
, it was quite unusual to Linking Words
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mobile phones Correct your spelling
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in
1996 to 1997, at just under 20%, consistently growing to around 45% Change preposition
from
in
1998 to 1999 and keeping almost stable Change preposition
from
untill
2000. Correct your spelling
until
Furthermore
, the popularity of phones had risen Linking Words
by
2000 to 2003, at about 70%, followed by CD player which had the highest figure of Change preposition
from
slighly
above 90 Correct your spelling
slightly
at the end
of the period.
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Similarly
, CD players were the most accessible at the beginning, at 60%, Linking Words
whereas
computers had a number Linking Words
of
approximately 27%, gradually reaching just above 50 Change preposition
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in
2002 to 2003. Change preposition
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the
access Correct article usage
apply
of
the Change preposition
to
internet
had occurred by 1998, representing 10%, and it grew dramatically to about 45% in 2002.Capitalize word
Internet
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