The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram demonstrates how
instant
noodles
are produced in large quantities
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using machines.
Overall
, there are eight distinct stages involved in
this
process. Beginning with the storage silos to the eventual labelling and sealing of
instant
noodles
. First of all, remove the flour from the storage silos and put it into the mixer, mingle it with water and oil. After that, place the mixed dough on rollers and press it into dough sheets before cutting
into
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dough strips by using the machine. It will transform into the shape of
instant
noodles
that we can see on the market, which
is
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are
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knowns
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known
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as
noddles
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noodles
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discs. In stage six, using oil to
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the
noodles
discs and drying them into
instant
noodles
is the most important step.
Secondly
, it is necessary to put the
instant
noodles
into the cups,
add
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and add
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vegetables and spices inside.
Finally
, labelling and sealing the cup with labels to sell on the market.
This
is the complete process of making
instant
noodles
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Manufacturing process
  • Noodle dough
  • Steaming
  • Cutting
  • Dough sheeting
  • Molding
  • Air-drying
  • Frying
  • Seasoning
  • Quality control
  • Packaging
  • Shelf life
  • Flavoring agents
  • Texture
  • Instant meal
  • Convenience food
  • Production line
  • Consumer
  • Ingredient mixing
  • Safety standards
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