Some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world,subject like science and technology are more important than History.Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Some individuals

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history

is one of the most essential subjects in schools but other

people

do not agree with

this

idea. They think in

this

modern world , subjects like science and technology are more important than others. In my eye, both

idea

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is

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valuable but I agree with

first

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the first

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group. I think

the

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apply

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history

is

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a fondumental

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fondumental

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fundamental

subject for teenagers.

Firstly

, I discuss

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about

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fans

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fan

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fans

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of science and technology. These

people

see

every thing

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everything

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in

modernation

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moderation

modernisation

modernization

and

the

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money is the first thing that they want. They do not consider

to

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people

's

soul

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souls

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. Nowadays, many

nation's

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nations'

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soul

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souls

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is

catched

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caught

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by harmful progressive

equipments

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types of equipment

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.

Secondly

, I note my notion about

people

that interested in

history

. They are

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an adult

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adult

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adults

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and nice person that

pay

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attention to historical

story

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stories

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for learning. They know our

ancestors

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ancestor's

ancestors'

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life is the best source to teach us the pleasant way

for having

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to have

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good

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a good

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life. War and peace in past are

learner

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learners

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like a teacher, I agree with

this

group. I think

history

is

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a fondumental

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fondumental

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fundamental

subject for all nations and

government

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governments

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specially

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especially

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for

the

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teenagers. Always the

history

class is

boring

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always boring

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for students because their trainer

is not have

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does not have

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exciting

charectors

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characteristics

so by

give

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giving

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some advice to their teacher and

utelized

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utilising

happy

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a happy

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teacher

this

problem will be solved.

To conclude

,

history

class

is

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apply

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should be

in

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at

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the heart of

government's

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the government's

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plans for students because

this

lesson

pollishing

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polishing

the soul.