According to some people, it would be better if industries are established in regions outside the urban area. Discuss its advantages and disadvantages.
It is often considered that in the contemporary world, a few
individual
believes that manufacturing units should be built outside the Change to a plural noun
individuals
city
. Whereas
, other people thinks
that companies should be in rural areas. Change the verb form
think
Thus
, this
essay will elaborate on both positive and negative sides which further
leads to a conclusion.
Commencing, there are manyfold benefits of having industries countryside as it serves in the reduction of traffice
jams in the peak hours and Correct your spelling
traffic
additionally
, there will be more places in the cities for the housings. However
, there are various kinds of detrimental gases that are produced by the manufacturing plants. For instance
, "The Times of India" a newspaper illustrated regarding
the deaths of Change preposition
apply
population
Add an article
the population
as a consequence
of harmful gases emit
by production units in Mumbai.
Probing ahead, there are some drawbacks Change the form of the verb
emitted
that
if industries are established outside the town in a few points. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Firstly
, the populace will face the problem of travelling distance because companies are too far from their home, therefore
, they might be late for office. Moreover
, if any humankind urgently have
to go their hometown Change the verb form
has
then
it might not be possible for him or her to reach on time. For example
, in Delhi, all the head offices are in the city
rather than ouside
Correct your spelling
outside
from
Change preposition
of
colony
which is Correct article usage
the colony
benefial
for the family members.
In a nutshell, the production plant should be Correct your spelling
beneficial
contructed
Correct your spelling
constructed
apart
of the town Correct your spelling
part
instead
of in the city
although
, it covers more space. In fact, the corporate offices should be in the city
which is essential for the employees.Submitted by vermarohit981.rv on
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Ensure the introduction clearly presents the topic and your intention to discuss both advantages and disadvantages. Avoid vague statements and make sure your thesis sets the stage for the discussion.
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coherence cohesion
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coherence cohesion
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coherence cohesion
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