The charts below show thge percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie charts illustrate the
use
of water
for three different purposes in six areas of the Earth by percentages.
Overall
, it is clear from the charts that except for North America
and Europe
most of the water
used
for agricultural purposes. The proportion of Add a missing verb
is used
water
used domestically is the smallest proportion in all areas except for Africa.
To start with except for North America
and Europe
in Central Asia Africa Southeast Asia an insult America
most of the water
use
for agriculture with 88%, 84%, 81% and 71% respectively. In terms of water
use
in industry with 53% Europe
is in the lead and that is
followed by North America
with 48%.
In terms of domestic use
of water
, in every part of the world
the proportion ranges between 7% to 15%. Add a comma
world,
Moreover
, except for North America
and Europe
, water
usage in industry ranges from 5% to 12%.Submitted by oyku.bilgin12 on
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