The charts below show thge percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show thge percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie charts illustrate the
use
of
water
for three different purposes in six areas of the Earth by percentages.
Overall
, it is clear from the charts that except for North
America
and
Europe
most of the
water
used
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for agricultural purposes. The proportion of
water
used domestically is the smallest proportion in all areas except for Africa. To start with except for North
America
and
Europe
in Central Asia Africa Southeast Asia an insult
America
most of the
water
use
for agriculture with 88%, 84%, 81% and 71% respectively. In terms of
water
use
in industry with 53%
Europe
is in the lead and
that is
followed by North
America
with 48%. In terms of domestic
use
of
water
, in every part of the
world
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the proportion ranges between 7% to 15%.
Moreover
, except for North
America
and
Europe
,
water
usage in industry ranges from 5% to 12%.
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