Imagine you had a disappointing experience at a restaurant and would like to address your concerns. Write a letter to the restaurant manager expressing your dissatisfaction and outlining the issues you encountered.

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Dear Sir I am writing regarding my problem. I came to dinner here yesterday at

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time. The first problem is your

waiters

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who is so rude. And they do not know anything. The

secod

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second

thing I would like to draw your attention to is your food and

their

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its

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quality. Their

tast

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taste

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test

is so horrible and

noone

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no one

can eat

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Also

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your table and seats are so old. There is all

looks

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simple. You can not sit on

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seat.

Your

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Does your

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restaurant have anything

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For

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example

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your waiter

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does

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not know how to take people's

order

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orders

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or serve people. And of

course

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your food's price is

soexpensive

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so expensive

expensive

. Some people do not pay

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their bills. In

short

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I suggest that you replace my money. And I waiting

apologize

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to apologize

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for your

behave

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. I look forward to hearing from you.

Your

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faithfully Ashurov Sardor

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To enhance task response, ensure that you address all parts of the prompt thoroughly. Provide specific details about each issue you encountered, how they affected your experience, and what actions you would like the restaurant to take in order to remedy the situation.

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Adopt a polite and formal tone suitable for writing to a manager. Refrain from using informal language and maintain respect throughout the letter.

coherence cohesion

Organize your letter logically by introducing each issue in a new paragraph. This helps to structure your points clearly and makes your letter easier to follow.

coherence cohesion

Use an appropriate greeting and closing for a formal letter. 'Dear Manager' or 'Dear Restaurant Manager' followed by a formal sign-off such as 'Yours sincerely' would be suitable.

coherence cohesion

Work on grammar, punctuation, and correct spelling to increase the clarity of your message and maintain a professional tone.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

142 words

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Imagine you had a disappointing experience at a restaurant and would like to address your concerns. Write a letter to the restaurant manager expressing your dissatisfaction and outlining the issues you encountered.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Topic: In many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.

As the world becomes technologically advanced,computers are replacing people at more and more jobs. what are some job positions that may be lost because of computers?What are some problems that may result from this situation?

In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which do you think is appropriate in today’s world?

Nowadays, many people have to work longer time, and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? What can employers do to make their life easier?