Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The table shows average calorie intake in the United States over a period of time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task
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The chats describe the salary comparisons and working
hours
per week
.
Overview, the income status of different professions is same
Correct article usage
the same
in
first and after three years, Change preposition
at
whereas
firefighter
and Fix the agreement mistake
firefighters
teacher
did maximum Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
hours
per week
compared to other profession
.
As per the Change the wording
another profession
other professions
provide
information on Wrong verb form
provided
bar
graphs, the police payout is above Correct article usage
the bar
than
20,000 Change preposition
apply
pound
Change to a plural noun
pounds
in
Change preposition
apply
initial
and after 3 years, Change the word
initially
however
the nurse income is below than pound 20,000. Interestingly, the Add a comma
however,
teacher
Change noun form
teacher's
earning
Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
is
slightly more than 30,000 Correct subject-verb agreement
are
pounds
. Similarly
, the starting salary is pounds
40,000 in
Change preposition
for
firefighter
, Fix the agreement mistake
firefighters
in contrast
, it is approximately pounds
42,000. Surprisingly, underground drivers is
popular and Change the verb form
are
get
handsome Wrong verb form
got
income
Fix the agreement mistake
incomes
around
50,000 Change preposition
of around
pounds
in first
and 3 Correct article usage
the first
year
ago.
Moving towards the table chat, the firefighters and Change to a plural noun
years
teacher
work for Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
highest
Correct article usage
the highest
hours
per week
which is calculated around
55 Change preposition
at around
hours
. whilest
, police working Correct your spelling
whilst
hours
are 40 per week
and 38 hours
for nursing.
The less
Change the quantifier
fewer
hours
work
Wrong verb form
worked
did
by Wrong verb form
done
underground
Add an article
an underground
the underground
driver
with 36 Fix the agreement mistake
drivers
house
but earn Fix the agreement mistake
houses
large
amount of money.Change the article
a large
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, week, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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