Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The table shows average calorie intake in the United States over a period of time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The table shows average calorie intake in the United States over a period of time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task
The chats describe the salary comparisons and working
hours
per
week
. Overview, the income status of different professions is
same
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the same
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in
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at
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first and after three years,
whereas
firefighter
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firefighters
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and
teacher
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teachers
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did maximum
hours
per
week
compared to
other profession
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another profession
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. As per the
provide
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provided
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information on
bar
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the bar
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graphs, the police payout is above
than
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apply
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20,000
pound
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pounds
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in
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apply
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initial
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initially
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and after 3 years,
however
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the nurse income is below than pound 20,000. Interestingly, the
teacher
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teacher's
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earning
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earnings
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is
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are
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slightly more than 30,000
pounds
.
Similarly
, the starting salary is
pounds
40,000
in
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for
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firefighter
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firefighters
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,
in contrast
, it is approximately
pounds
42,000. Surprisingly, underground drivers
is
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are
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popular and
get
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got
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handsome
income
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incomes
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around
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of around
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50,000
pounds
in
first
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the first
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and 3
year
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years
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ago. Moving towards the table chat, the firefighters and
teacher
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teachers
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work for
highest
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the highest
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hours
per
week
which is calculated
around
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at around
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55
hours
.
whilest
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whilst
, police working
hours
are 40 per
week
and 38
hours
for nursing. The
less
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fewer
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hours
work
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worked
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did
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done
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by
underground
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an underground
the underground
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driver
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drivers
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with 36
house
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houses
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but earn
large
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a large
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amount of money.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, week, pounds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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