The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration demonstrates the process by which electricity is generated by means of geothermal energy.
Overall
, what stands out from the process is that it consists of six key steps, half of which occur underground and half of which take place overground. Beginning with the first half, after cold
water
is pumped down 4.5km beneath the earth's surface it reaches an injection well. The injection well transmits the
water
through the geothermal zone, which is composed of hot rocks, before it arrives at a production well. The newly heated
water
pumped
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back up via
this
well to the surface. Overground, a
condonser
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condenser
is set up to collect the hot
water
and send its steam through a narrow pipe toward a turbine. The steam powers the rotation of
turbine
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the turbine
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which in turn powers a generator to which it is connected.
This
generator
finally
produces electricity which can
subsequently
be transmitted to electrical towers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • renewable source
  • sustainable
  • drilling wells
  • hot water and steam
  • drive turbines
  • generate electricity
  • conversion
  • cooling process
  • re-injected
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
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