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The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two diagrams compare the developments that have been brought into the city of Westley from 1815 until today. .
Overall
, a new transport option has been added to the town and the green places have been replaced with a housing estate and a
railway
 station.
However
, more houses have been added to the city. A
railway
 station was built in the
south
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southwest
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west
 of
West
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the West
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 Gate Shopping
centre
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Centre
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 and a
railway
 line was constructed from
South
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Southwest
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west
 of the cinema to the
North
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Northwest
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west
 of
river
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the river
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twine
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Twine
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. The fields in the
south
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southwest
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west
 of Market
square
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Square
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 in 1815 were cleared and replaced with the main
railway
 station.
Moreover
, a cinema has been installed
in
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on
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 the left of
market
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Market
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 Square.
Additionally
, the road that linked Tinton village and the market square in 1815 has today been extended to the
new
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newly
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 installed shopping, business and residential area in the north.
Nevertheless
, Lenton
woods
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Woods
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were
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was
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 flattened and transformed into the Lenton housing estate
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words railway, west with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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