The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the internet everyday from 2003-2006.
The given column graph illustrates the
percentage
of adults of different age groups using the internet
between 2003 and 2006, in Capitalize word
Internet
the
Great Britain. The Correct article usage
apply
over 65s
had the Add a hyphen
over-65s
least
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lowest
percentage
of internet
users.
The main users of the internet
were young adults aged between 16 and 24 years. In 2003 and 2004, they shared the same percentage
, which was 80%. In 2005, this
figure increased significantly to 100%,
but decreased slightly to 90% in the next year.
We can see from the chart that all the age groups experienced an upward trend as far as their daily use of the Remove the comma
apply
internet
is concerned. In the 25-44 group, there was a gradual growth in the Capitalize word
Internet
percentage
, from 50% to 80%, between 2003 and 2006. There were similar increases for the 45 to 54 year olds
, rising from 60% in 2003 to 80% in 2006. As for the other two groups, Add a hyphen
54-year-olds
although
the percentages had minor fluctuation, the overall
trend was upwards.
Overall
, adults between 18 and 44 showed the greatest usage of the internet
and the users grew with time regardless of their age.Submitted by Fadilla.audrey on
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