The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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can be seen from the chart, the proportion of owning and renting apartments in a family in the United Kingdom and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
, there was a gradual fluctuation in the number of owned and rented houses in the two Commonwealth of England countries.
To begin
, the percentage of owning flats in 1918 was nearly 23%;
however
, it increased steadily up to 32% by 1939. After remaining stable between 1939 and 1953, the data increased rapidly for the next 48 years to 70%.
Although
the trend went down to 65% in 2011, the owned houses in both two countries were still the highest proportion among the other.
In contrast
, the statistics for rented apartments among the two countries started from 87% which was the highest percentage for renting compared to other years.
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the trend decreased steadily even though it remained the same between 1939 and 1953. After decreasing gradually until 2001, the percentage of rented houses fluctuated from 30% to 35% in 2011.
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