You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own.Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club.In your letter • introduce yourself • say why you are interested in this sports club • ask some qustions about the club e.g facilities,members,costs.
Dear Sir
My name is Ogabek.I study in
college's
Correct article usage
a college's
sport
Fix the agreement mistake
sports
course
where has no any
sports facilities. I have been Correct quantifier usage
apply
student
of Add an article
a student
this
college because of my major. I am going to be a table tennis teacher that's why I have been studying there since I chose this
major. I was interested in this
sport because of my nephew who is named Akmal.He told me about this
sports club.After that
we Add a comma
that,
enroled
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enrolled
on
Change preposition
in
this
course
togather
. Correct your spelling
together
Thus
,I chose this
course
. And I have some qustions
about the Correct your spelling
questions
course
. Firstly
,I want to know about facilities
.What kind of facilities will you provide us with during the Correct article usage
the facilities
course
and will the equipments
be free of charge. Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
Secondly
,I want to be aware of members and also
about age
limitation you demandCorrect article usage
the age
on
.What is the Change preposition
apply
minimal
age for Replace the word
minimum
this
course
to attend?Finally
, does every sport
club have payment for attendance?And if your Change the noun form
sports
course
has payment how much is it? I look forward your
reply.
Yours sincerely
Ogabek.Change preposition
to your
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coherence cohesion
To improve logical structure, ensure that each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and that the ideas flow naturally from one to the next. Include transitional phrases to guide the reader through your points.
task achievement
Maintain a respectful and formal tone, suitable for writing to a manager. Address the recipient appropriately and use polite language throughout your letter.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to improve clarity and organization. For example, keep personal background separate from questions about the club.
task achievement
Answer the task prompts completely by introducing yourself, explaining your interest in the club, and asking questions. Ensure all points are addressed clearly and directly.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.