Human activities are contributing to climate change. What extend do you agree or disagree?
Climate change is going up
due to
human activity
and modern civilization. Most argue that environmental pollution is not only destroyed by human activity
, but they also
want to try developing this
sector to overcome it. This
essay will explain why they agree on it.
First and foremost, this
observation is that, in every sector, we want to try to use technological support for accelerating
our daily work and Change preposition
to accelerate
making
it easy Wrong verb form
make
for
Change preposition
to
adaptation
, Replace the word
adapt
this
contribution is growing by human requirement. For example
, worldwide right now different types tape of vehicles for rapid movement and well support for transporting in
Change preposition
across
whole
globe reason producing huge amounts of smoke. Correct article usage
the whole
This
smoke is produced by the uses
of fossil fuel and col. Fix the agreement mistake
use
Additionally
, for travelling in space for satellite facilities, they are using rockets and this
reason needs huge amounts of fuel for burning.
Furthermore
, this
civilization is required for the development of lifestyle and protection from natural calamity. Moreover
, this
natural disaster is happening by
the Change preposition
because of
activity
of humans. This
human development wants to try to increase the housing facility and farming facilities in the future for easy survival. The housing development is reducing the forest and plants. Most livable places are also
required for other creatures and this
activity
reduces this
area for that living and growing. Additionally
, cultivation of farming has required a large amount of space and as well as
require sort of technological advancement
like truckers, water pumps and harvesting machines. All requirements will be exhilarating the climate change.
In conclusion, the climate is changing concern Change the noun form
advancements
by
human Change preposition
to
activity
as fer
it is very true things and it is Correct your spelling
far
also
right that,
they are taking a lot of initiative to reduce natural disasters.Remove the comma
apply
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