It is importante for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Add an article
the present
show examples
era,it is very important for
a children
Correct the article-noun agreement
a child
show examples
to be aware of what
Correct your spelling
show examples
of things they are performing
as well as
the vital difference between good and bad things as soon as they can.Here, I completely agree with
point. In
Add a comma
show examples
I will mention
Correct article usage
a few
show examples
of the reasons for
suggest some techniques to correct the mistakes. A good reason to support
point is that
Remove the comma
show examples
it is very important to stay away from nuisance. To elaborate, in today's world
Correct your spelling
show examples
are having
Wrong verb form
show examples
bad habits
Submitted by tpatel.291105 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

introduction conclusion present
Make sure to complete the essay and provide both introduction and conclusion to frame your argument effectively.
supported main points
Expand on your ideas by giving detailed explanations, specific examples, and a full development of your arguments.
complete response
Ensure your essay directly answers all parts of the question. Provide a full response to the statement and questions asked.
logical structure
Organize ideas clearly and logically. Make use of linking words and paragraphs to connect ideas smoothly.
clear comprehensive ideas
Clarify your position, and make sure each paragraph presents clear and comprehensive ideas that reinforce your overall argument.
relevant specific examples
Use specific examples and detailed explanations to support your positions and arguments. Ensure these examples are clearly linked to the main idea of each paragraph.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: