As global trade increase, many goods including those we use in daily basis are produced in another country and have to be transport long distance. Do benefit of this trend outweigh disadvantages?

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As global trade is on the rise nowadays, a large number of products including those we utilise
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daily
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basis are made in another
country
and need to be exported by hundreds of miles. Indeed, everything comes with a price.
However
, despite the drawbacks it brings about,
this
movement has positively made great impacts
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society. The global trade has advantages to offer.
First,
it supplies people's basic
need
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needs
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,
such
as healthy food like vegetables. Evidently, a
country
like America does not grow enough vegetables and fruits so
that
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it has to import them from another
country
,
such
as
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the Philipine
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Philipine
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Philippines
.
Secondly
,
international
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the international
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market is a great means which supports countries' diplomacy.
This
means that countries
who
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are diplomatically connected by trading purposes will have a tendency to create a better relationship in the coming days.
However
, there are disadvantages
of
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this
. One of them is the carbon emission which is left from transporting goods by planes. Taking Russia as an example,
this
country
has limited the use of cargo planes to reduce the hazardous waste that
thrown
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into the air. Other than that, transporting long
distance
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distances
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most likely increases the cost of the product.
For instance
, companies must spend high transport
expenditure
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expenditures
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and pay taxes
everytime
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the products are shipped to different nations.
To sum up
,
international
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the international
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market helps people across the globe fulfil their
need
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needs
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and create
bonding
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bonds
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between countries.
However
,
this
type of trading can be environmentally harmful and makes goods cost higher.
Therefore
, I opine that with the government making policies to combat the possible issues, the advantages of
this
movement should outweigh the disadvantages.
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