the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in the Austrillian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in the Austrillian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in the Austrillian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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which it is reached from a survey about people’s
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of purchasing and using
two
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caffeinated
drink
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,
coffe
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and
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, in
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in Australia.
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,it can be seen that the
percentage
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of
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using and purchasing
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coffee
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is more than fresh kinds in all
five
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ci3es so using fresh
coffee
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is the least popular
way
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between
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people in all
five
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ci3es .
By
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contrast
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the most popular
way
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to
using
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coffeeThe bar graph indicates
informa3on
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which it is reached from a survey about a comparison of the ways people purchase and drink
two
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caffeinated drinks ,
coffee
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and
tea
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, in
five
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ci3es in Australia in
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four weeks.
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,it can be seen that the
percentage
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of
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using and purchasing
instant
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coffee
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is more than fresh kinds in all
five
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ci3es
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While using
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fresh
coffee
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is not as popular as
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other items and it is the least popular
way
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between
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people . The most popular
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to
using
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coffee
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and
tea
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is going to a café in all
ci3es
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,except
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that
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the
percentage
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of using
instant
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coffee
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is a
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more than drinking out . Regarding the amount of fresh
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coffee’s
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consump3on
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in
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Australian ci3es ,Sydney is
on
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the top of the list with an average of around 44
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percent
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is in
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second
place
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with an average of around 43
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that
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number is close to
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.The amount of fresh
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coffee’s
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consump3on
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in Brisbane is as popular as its
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in
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,it is just under 35
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in these
two
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ci3es so these are
in
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the
boEom
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of the list.
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amount for Hobart is around 38
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men3oned
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in all
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instant
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coffee
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is more popular than fresh
coffee
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.Hobart comes top of the list in using
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coffee
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with an average of around 54
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Brisbane with a slight difference with an average of around 53
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.
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with 50
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with around 48
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and Sydney with just over 45
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are placed in third,
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place
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respec3vely
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,if we look at the graph
it is clear that
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going to a café
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a
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or
coffee
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is the most popular
way
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compare
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to buying fresh and
instant
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coffee
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.
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and Hobart with just under 65
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.Sydney comes next with just over 60
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Brisbane is seen with an average
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comes with just over 50
percent
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,
compare
Change the form of the verb
compared

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb compare. Consider changing it.

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to using
instant
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

coffee
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

, it is clear drinking in
café
Correct article usage
a café

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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is not as popular as buying
instant
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

coffee
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

in
Adelaide
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

,it is an
exep3on
Correct your spelling
example

If you don’t want exep3on to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

that drinking out is less popular than using
instant
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

coffee
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

in
Adelaide
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

compare to other ci3es.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, overall, while".
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words two, tea, five, percentage, instant, coffee, ci, es, way, adelaide, percent, place with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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