the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in the Austrillian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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habitude
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two
caffeinated drink
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drinks
coffe
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coffee
tea
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city
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cities
Overall
,it can be seen that the percentage
of people’s
using and purchasing Change noun form
people
instant
coffee
is more than fresh kinds in all five
ci3es so using fresh coffee
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informa3on
which it is reached from a survey about a comparison of the ways people purchase and drink Correct your spelling
information
two
caffeinated drinks ,coffee
and tea
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ci3es in Australia in last
four weeks.
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the last
Overall
,it can be seen that the percentage
of people’s
using and purchasing Change noun form
people
instant
coffee
is more than fresh kinds in all five
ci3es
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categories
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Using
coffee
is not as popular as two
other items and it is the least popular Correct article usage
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way
between
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among
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use
coffee
and tea
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cities
Adelaide
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consumption
five
Australian ci3es ,Sydney is on
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percent
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per cent
Melborn
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Melbourne
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with an average of around 43 percent
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this
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Adelaide
,it is just under 35 percent
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amount for Hobart is around 38 percent
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countries
instant
coffee
is more popular than fresh coffee
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coffee
with an average of around 54 percent
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per cent
while
Brisbane with a slight difference with an average of around 53 percent
is in second Change the spelling
per cent
place
.Adelaide
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per cent
Melborne
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Melbourne
percent
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per cent
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it is clear that
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tea
or coffee
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compare
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compared
instant
coffee
.Melborn
and Hobart with just under 65 Correct your spelling
Melbourne
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per cent
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percent
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place,
Adelaide
comes with just over 50 percent
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compared
instant
coffee
, it is clear drinking in café
is not as popular as buying Correct article usage
a café
instant
coffee
in Adelaide
,it is an exep3on
that drinking out is less popular than using Correct your spelling
example
instant
coffee
in Adelaide
compare to other ci3es.Submitted by bahram.azizzade on
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