The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The bar charts depict
amount
of money Add an article
the amount
people
spent on junk food in United
Kingdom Correct article usage
the United
by
surveyed in 1990 by income categories, Change preposition
apply
while
the line charts illustrate the proportion consumption
of fast food by consumers during Change preposition
of consumption
the
1970-1990. By and large, Change the article
apply
hamburgers
show rapidly
development among the menus.
Change the adverb
rapid
First,
most people
with more salary prefer to eat hamburger
as the weekly menu which Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
counted
a hefty 45 pence for each Wrong verb form
counts
individuals
. Compared to Change to a singular noun
individual
people
with the standard check amount, it showing
the same trend that Change the form of the verb
shows
people
really
into Add a missing verb
are really
the
Correct article usage
apply
hamburgers
. While
the lower one, prefer
to consume fish and chips as daily consume than Correct subject-verb agreement
prefers
hamburgers
and pizza. In addition
, fish and chips have
slightly different Verb problem
are
with
Change preposition
from
hamburgers
in low salary parts.
Furthermore
, hamburgers
and pizza showing
the same increase Wrong verb form
showed
development
during the surveys in 20 years. Hamburger increasing decline which Change preposition
in development
take
up to 500 grammes in 1990. Change the verb form
takes
Moreover
, fish and chips show the
declining line during the survey since Correct article usage
a
in
1975.Change preposition
apply
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, hamburgers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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