The line graph shows the Population in the state of Oregon by county. Three counties that incresed in population between 1940 and 2000, Columbia, Yamhill and Washington had shown the different increasing.
The line graph illustrates the inhabitants in the state of Oregon by three countries that had climbed in population from 1940 to 2000
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Columbia, Change preposition
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Yamhill
and Washington.
Overall
, it is undeniable that Washington was
the highest population through the years. Verb problem
had
While
,
Columbia and Remove the comma
apply
Yamhill
were
had Unnecessary verb
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same
trend which Change the article
the same
were
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was
increaced
slightly.
In 1940, in Correct your spelling
increased
Washington
the individuals started with 75 Add a comma
Washington,
then
go
up to Wrong verb form
went
aproximatly
120 in 1970 Correct your spelling
approximately
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and susequently
susequently
quickly climbed to almost over 240 in 2000.
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subsequently
Yamhill
's population in 1940 was 30 then
increased slightly to 45 in 1970 then
reached to
90 in 2000. It is similar to Change preposition
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Yamhill
the Columbia began about
25 Change preposition
at about
then
had a moderate rose to almost 35 then
had a depict shaply
increase to 75 in 2000.Correct your spelling
sharply
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