The graph below show the number of university graduates in canada from 1992 to 2007.

The line chart depicts the quality of graduates in Canada

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1992 until 2007.

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, the graduates from female in the first period and

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up in the

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males

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graduations in

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the

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women even though

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in the

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1992 until 1995 females

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little

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from 100,000 to 105,000

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,

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1996 to 2000 back to the first period at 100,000. The

females

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graduation

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to

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the top

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position in 2006 with the

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graduates almost 150,000. Meanwhile, the graduation of females in Canada

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fluctuation,

70,000

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student

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that graduated

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in

this

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in 1995

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75,000. Drop until 2003, and speedy

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last

moment at 95,000.