Two maps show the change of a coastal town, called Pentland, from 1950 to 2007

The pair of maps depict the alternation in the layout of a coastal city

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known as Pentland between 1950 and 2007, illustrating how the area underwent expansion over

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period of time in terms of residential areas, business complexes and green spaces. A panoramic view of the maps unveils the full picture of urban development. It can be observed that a lot of people immigrated to Pentland by 2007, as the infrastructures and facilities became accessible to them in the coastal city. Flanking the main road on either side, numerous types of shops spread outwards, As the main road structure with two bisecting roads remained similar.

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the industrial area of 1950 nestled in the west of the city was replaced with a swimming pool and multi-storey car parking in 2007. The grasslands in the northeastern and southeastern of the maps in 1950 were removed and the free spaces were shifted to multiple apartment complexes in 2007.

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, the sea evolved into a Yacht marina encircled by roads.

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Topic Vocabulary:

coastal town
layout
undeveloped
infrastructure
landmarks
rural
significant changes
tourist attractions
residential areas
housing estates
tourism-driven economy
green spaces
beachfront properties
coastline
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Two maps show the change of a coastal town, called Pentland, from 1950 to 2007

Parents of obese children should be punished for making them fat. Do you agree or disagree?

The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.