the line graph compares the consumption of fast foods by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000

the line graph compares the consumption of fast foods by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
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The line graph illustrates the fluctuations in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers
during
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1975 to 2000.
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, the consumption rate of hamburgers and pizza increased significantly
whereas
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, that of fish and chips decreased drastically. In 1975, the number of times fish and chips
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eaten stood at 100 per
year
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.
After
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this
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, the ingestion of fish and chips experienced fluctuation for a
period
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of 10 years and
then
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plunged over the following 15 years to 40 per
year
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in 2000.
In contrast
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to
this
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, there was a dramatic growth in the consumption of hamburgers and pizza over the
period
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. The ingestion of hamburgers was at a low of 10 per
year
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and
then
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rose steadily over
years
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the years
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and was at the peak of consumption in 2000 at 100 per
year
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. Pizza followed
similar
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a similar
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pattern, beginning the
period
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with approximately 5 per
year
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and inclined to 85 per
year
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in 1995 and remained stable till the end of the
period
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in 2000.

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