The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table depicts information about what the jobless do on their time
last
year in the United Kingdom.
To begin
with, the data were divided by gender and by time. It is shown that in the morning most of the
women
in the UK were doing their
housework
for
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about 49 per cent, whilst
men
at 22 per cent in job hunting.
On the other hand
, in the afternoon, watching TV was the main popular activity for
men
by
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14%,
while
women
still the same, which
housework
was
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with 21%. Looking detail at the table, another three activities for
men
in the early days were shopping (20%), gardening (14%), and
housework
(19%).
In contrast
, other top lists for
women
besides
housework
in the morning were shopping with 26%, job hunting with 16%, and visiting friends or relatives with 10%.
Moreover
,
at the end
of the day, the least that
women
and
men
did was stay in bed, play sports, and drink.
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