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The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphic depicts the amount of
people
 who hail a museum, which is broken down
three
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into three
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category
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categories
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 of visitors based on their ages. It is
obvious
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obviously
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 evident that there are huge discrepancies among the visitors under 15,
adult
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adults
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, and special exhibition visitors. What is the most striking when looking at the data is the fact that
category
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the category
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 of mature
people
 become
dominant
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the dominant
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 hail to the museum. From the beginning, in 1997, there
was
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were
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 more than 300
thousand
being
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the
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guests and steadily increased until reached a peak
more
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of more
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 than 400
thousand
 in 2007, which was less about 20
thousand
 in the
last
period
. On the other side, teenagers under 15 years old, almost 4 times less than mature
people
 from 1997 to 2002, and being 5 times in the
twos
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two
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period
.
This
is
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also
indicating
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indicates
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 that the number of
visitor
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visitors
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teenagers
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to teenagers
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was
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gradually decreased over the
period
given
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apply
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.
In addition
, special guests are the lower numbers which was no more than 50
thousand
 over
fifteen-year
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fifteen
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.
Furthermore
, 2007 is the year visited by many
people
, compared
in
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to
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 2002 at just 441,200
people
Overall
, it can be seen that in each
period
, the trend is similar which is often visited by adult
individual
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individuals
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 and followed by teenagers;
besides
 the least is special guests.
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