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The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart presents the actual figures of
population
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 and tendency change for
India
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 and
China
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 from 2000 to 2050.
Overall
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, the study
initially
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 showed that
China
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's
population
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 was much bigger than
India
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's. Around the midpoint of the period, both countries had an equal number of inhabitants.
After
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this
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 convergence, the trend reversed, and
India
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 surpassed
China
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 in
population
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 growth. Having nearly 1.250
million
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 people in 2000,
China
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 demonstrated a steady rise until the top point was reached in 2030 with about 1.430
million
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 by that time. By passing
this
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 peak, a declining drift became making progress and during the next 20 years, the
population
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 degraded to the level of 1.400
million
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.
On the other hand
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, the public of
India
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 was constantly increasing and by 2050 approximately 1.600
million
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 residents lived there. Notably, in 2030 both countries had the same number of people but
in contrast
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 to
China
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,
India
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's populace has expanded.
However
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, the slight tendency encountered where the
population
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 growth is slowly speeding down.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, india, china, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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