You are studying English at the private language school attended by many internatsional students. You are planning a surprise biryhday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him/her to the party. In your letter: •explain the reason for the party •give the date and time of the party •suggest what the classmate could bring to the party
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Dear Tim
How are you ? I hope you are
please
about our language school. I do not have any idea if you are aware of our Replace the word
pleased
surprise
party
which is dealed
for two days later for our good classmate Robin , from Turkey is going to have his 18th Correct your spelling
dealt
biryhday
three days later which falls on the 25th of September and l have Correct your spelling
birthday
plan
to makes it a Change the article
the plan
surprise
biryhday
Correct your spelling
birthday
party
just after our French language lesson.
By the way , unless you have noticed that , Robin is going to through
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be through
difficult
time since he Correct article usage
a difficult
has
came here to study and he Unnecessary verb
apply
also
feels a bit homesick . In addition
, his little sister's sickness also
him depressed. In this
situation , giving him Correct article usage
a surprise
surprise
Correct article usage
a surprise
party
on his biryhday
would make him cheer up.
Anyway, l have already planned Correct your spelling
birthday
about
Change preposition
apply
this
surprise
party
. Kally and Tom should bring decorations for the party
room . Molly is going to bring some sparkling water . Ann is preparing her special birthday cake while
l am bringing my guitar to play my special tube . As for you , you will bring candels
to decorate the cake.
Let's have a great Correct your spelling
candles
party
to cheer Robin up!
With love
LilySubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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Structure
Ensure the letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Your letter's structure is somewhat clear but could be better organized. Consider separating ideas more distinctly into paragraphs.
Greeting and Closing
Use greetings and closings correctly. 'How are you?' is a nice way to start, but make sure to close more formally in a letter to a classmate for a more appropriate tone (e.g., 'Best regards, Lily').
Grammar and Spelling
Check your spelling and grammar more carefully. Errors such as 'biryhday' instead of 'birthday' and 'candels' instead of 'candles' can detract from the clarity of your message.
Detailing
Your task achievement is good, but you could improve by providing more specific details about the party, such as the exact time and location.
Tone
Maintain a suitable tone throughout the letter. Use a tone that is friendly and inviting but also ensure it is properly formal for writing to a classmate who might not be a close friend.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,