The tables below give the distribution of world population in 1950 and 2000,with an estamate of the situation in 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevent.
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Looking at the table below, it can be seen a piece of information about the world
population
and its distribution in 1950 and 2000 years,followed by the
prediction about the future situation in 2050. What is quite noticeable,is that digits have a tendency to grow when it comes to Correct article usage
a
total
number of people; Change the article
a total
the total
while
in 1950 the world population
was 2.5 billion, in 2000 the indicator was 6.0 and it is estimated to rise to 9.0 until
2050.
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To begin
with, the distribution of humanity varied depending on the continent,which is discussed,however
, Asia had the highest proportion in comparison with other parts of the world,which was just under the half of total in 1950 and 60% in 2000. In contrast
, the percentage of people in Oceania was lower than 1 and reached the point of 1 in 2000 with no predictions to increase.
Looking more closely, it can be noticed that the Europinian
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European
population
had a tendency to decrease dramatically,while
the percentage of people who lived in Africa rose. For example
, in 1950 the digit which illustrates the amount of Europinians was 22%,while
Africa had more than 2 times lower indicator. However
,it is predicted that in 2050 Africa and Europe will reach 20 % and 7% respectively. In addition
, Latin and North America showed quite a similar pattern with the
small minority of the Correct article usage
a
population
,which was not higher than 9%.Submitted by amina.ilyuk8 on
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