The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph gives information about the monthly cost change of
copper
, nickel
and zinc
in 2014. Overall
, three different metals which are copper
, nickel
and zinc
have experienced a fluctuation trend. Then
, copper
and zinc
had an upward trend in the last
of the period, while
Nickel
was stable.
In the first three months, Copper
and Nickel
decreased by around 1% and stayed stable until April. The percentage of Copper
and Nickel
slightly declined until June with Copper
(less than 0%) and Nickel
(-3% ). While
Zinc
had a growth change in prices in February at 3% , this
rate slowly dropped four months later and reached around -1%.
Interestingly, the three differences in metals risen
marginally in July before experiencing a stable two months later. Wrong verb form
rose
Copper
, Nickel
and Zinc
increased in November, but in the last
period Copper
and Zinc
continued to grow around 1% and 2% respectively, and Nickel
just stayed at 1% in December.Submitted by sintakristiani22 on
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