The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph gives information about the monthly cost change of
copper
, Use synonyms
nickel
and Use synonyms
zinc
in 2014. Use synonyms
Overall
, three different metals which are Linking Words
copper
, Use synonyms
nickel
and Use synonyms
zinc
have experienced a fluctuation trend. Use synonyms
Then
, Linking Words
copper
and Use synonyms
zinc
had an upward trend in the Use synonyms
last
of the period, Linking Words
while
Linking Words
Nickel
was stable.
In the first three months, Use synonyms
Copper
and Use synonyms
Nickel
decreased by around 1% and stayed stable until April. The percentage of Use synonyms
Copper
and Use synonyms
Nickel
slightly declined until June with Use synonyms
Copper
(less than 0%) and Use synonyms
Nickel
(-3% ). Use synonyms
While
Linking Words
Zinc
had a growth change in prices in February at 3% , Use synonyms
this
rate slowly dropped four months later and reached around -1%.
Interestingly, the three differences in metalsLinking Words
risen
marginally in July before experiencing a stable two months later. Wrong verb form
rose
Copper
, Use synonyms
Nickel
and Use synonyms
Zinc
increased in November, but in the Use synonyms
last
period Linking Words
Copper
and Use synonyms
Zinc
continued to grow around 1% and 2% respectively, and Use synonyms
Nickel
just stayed at 1% in December.Use synonyms
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel, zinc with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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