The diagram below show the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below show the process for recycling plastic bottles.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The given process chart
,
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displays the operation for recycling
bottles
of
plastic
.
Overall
, we can observe that
total
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9
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stages occur for recycling
of
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plastic
bottles
. Mainly the work is done by machinery and less work by
human
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is required.
Firstly
,people throw away unwanted
plastic
bottles
in a large dumping box with a recycling logo.
Then
, a truck is used to collect
bottles
from the box and
delievers
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deliver
it
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them
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to
recycling
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the recycling
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center
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.At
recycling
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the recycling
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center, sorting of recycling and non-recycling
bottles
occur
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.
After
this
,the recycling
bottles
are compressed with each other to form large blocks. The large blocks are crushed
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the help of two big
crusher
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and
becomes
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small pieces of
plastic
. These pieces are washed
by
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water to remove unwanted impurities. Following that,these pieces are put into a machine which, ultimately produces
plastic
pellets.
Further
, pellets are heated to produce raw materials.
Lastly
,raw materials are used to make things like bags, pencils, clothes,
bottles
and many more.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bottles, plastic with synonyms.
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