The diagram below show the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The given process chart
,
displays the operation for recycling Remove the comma
apply
bottles
of plastic
.
Overall
, we can observe that total
Correct article usage
a total
9
stages occur for recycling Change preposition
of 9
of
Change preposition
apply
plastic
bottles
. Mainly the work is done by machinery and less work by human
is required.
Fix the agreement mistake
humans
Firstly
,people throw away unwanted plastic
bottles
in a large dumping box with a recycling logo.Then
, a truck is used to collect bottles
from the box and delievers
Correct your spelling
deliver
it
to Correct pronoun usage
them
recycling
Add an article
the recycling
a recycling
center
.At Change the spelling
centre
recycling
center, sorting of recycling and non-recycling Add an article
the recycling
bottles
occur
.Correct subject-verb agreement
occurs
After
this
,the recycling bottles
are compressed with each other to form large blocks.
The large blocks are crushed by
the help of two big Change preposition
with
crusher
and Change to a plural noun
crushers
becomes
small pieces of Change the verb form
become
plastic
. These pieces are washed by
water to remove unwanted impurities. Following that,these pieces are put into a machine which, ultimately produces Change preposition
with
plastic
pellets. Further
, pellets are heated to produce raw materials. Lastly
,raw materials are used to make things like bags, pencils, clothes, bottles
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