The chart below shows the percentage of people accessing news via different media in one country in 2013, 2015 and 2017.

The chart below shows the percentage of people accessing news via different media in one country in 2013, 2015 and 2017.
The given statistics represent the proportion of people
accesing
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accessing
news through various media in the same country in different years: 2013, 2015, and 2017. As forms of media are specified television, printed newspapers, radio and the internet, accessed from any device. In these three years, the utilization of newspapers as a source of information decreased considerably,
while
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the internet
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internet
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Internet
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increased. Even though the percentage of
population
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using television
for informing
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themselves did not change drastically, it lowered, varying
within
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between
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about 79% in 2013 and 68% in 2015. Radio was mostly used in 2013, 32%,
however
, in 2015 and 2017
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its
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usage remained practically the same, slightly decreasing,
30
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%. The utilization of
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internet
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Internet
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had
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highly increased through the given years, from 31% in 2013 to 40% in 2015 and approximately 70% in 2017.
On the contrary
, the usage of newspapers reduced from about 41% in 2013 to 21% in 2017.
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