The Map Below shows the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps below illustrate the alterations that happened to Willington town. The changes took place from 1780 to 1860 and 2000.
As a whole, the farm vanished like a wood, on the farm side people created a road.
Thus
building became more convenient for the town dwellers.
To begin
with, the amount of wood decreased to1860, although
instead
ofthe
farmland areaCorrect your spelling
of the
had built
a road to the river with a bridge. Wrong verb form
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In contrast
, the number of villages doubled. There were no significant changes till 1860, nevertheless
, development in this
Willington countryside didn`t stop.
To continue with, along the river had been constructed some shops next to the wetland for birds, which were also
erected only in 2000. In addition
, on the woods side are 2 schools with 3 sports fields. If we want to go to these places, we would go through a short road from a large number of villages ( 500 ).
To sum up
, we can see that Willington was more urbanized and infrastructure was raised by people.Submitted by balnur_amantay on
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