Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Others think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
It is argued that nowadays the importance of Science and Technology plays a more significant role in the education of children than
History
. In my opinion, we can not compare those subjects, because both are crucial for society's future and should be equally valued being part of school programs.
Firstly
, keeping up with modern scientific and engineering trends is beneficial as well as
for individuals and people in general. While
studying, schoolchildren gain the basis for their next study level. Thus
, it will be easier for them to identify the further
direction in getting the degree and, as a result
, to find themselves in adult life. For example
, a lot of people around the world have a limited set of subjects to study, which causes them not to be able to overcome the low-paid job barrier.
Secondly
, I also
believe that society should not forget about its origin. History
teaches us about plenty of things and the main ones are: what we have done well, and what needs to be improved. The only problem I see is that "history
is written by the winners" which means that some facts may not be genuine. For instance
, a lot of conflicts are happening between countries or even regions, because of mismatches in historical facts on both sides.
In conclusion, such
subjects as science, technology or history
should be definitely taught at school with an equally high attitude to each: they are an integral part of holistic education. Having said that, those are the foundation for the young generation and more doors will be opened to them in future.Submitted by serginio.nick on
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