the diagrams show how house designs differ according to climate

The given diagram shows two kinds of

house

Use synonyms

designs which

Correct subject-verb agreement

are

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used for cool

weather

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and warm

weather

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Overall

Linking Words

, it can be clearly seen that the

house

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shape, windows, and

the

Correct article usage

apply

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materials used differ for each climate. To commence, for cold

weather

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, the roof of the

house

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should be

high- angled

Correct your spelling

high-angled

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. There is a window which

allowed

Wrong verb form

allows

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the

sun light

Correct your spelling

sunlight

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to enter the

house

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, so by using of heat storing material inside the

buliding

Correct your spelling

building

, the

house

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will be kept warm.

Also

Linking Words

, the insulation materials outside the building are used as protection against

the

Correct article usage

apply

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heat loss. In

second

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the second

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picture for warm climate,

however

Linking Words

, the building has

different

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a different

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shape than that of for cold

weather

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Firstly

Linking Words

, it is made with two high-angled

roof

Change to a plural noun

roofs

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to reflect the

sun light

Correct your spelling

sunlight

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for

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keep the inside cooler, but the insulation material will be used to protect the

house

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against the sun’s heat.

Secondly

Linking Words

, there will be two windows which are openable for nights to exchange the air

Change preposition

apply

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inside.

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Feb 15, 2024

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Vocabulary: Replace the words house, weather with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

163 words

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