An increasing number of people choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their apperance. Why do people have operations to change the way they look? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

There is no doubt that the advancement in technologies

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on

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healthcare

such

as plastic

surgery

.Nowadays,many people choose to have cosmetic surgeries to improve one's

apperance

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appearance

.

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trends have both negative and positive sides.In the next paragraph,I will explain the reasons why

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people have operations to look better in detail.

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developlments

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development

developments

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self-esteem.Having plastic

surgery

helps enhance their confidence levels and improve their appearance.

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,

young

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adult with a lump on their back needs

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surgery

to improve the posture of their

body

.Next,some older adults have a right to maintain a younger and more vibrant look.

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can help them to stay positive and happy.

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surgeries

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negative

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on their bodies if individuals have been addicted to cosmetic procedures

such

as infection and

malfuction

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malfunction

of their

body

parts.

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having

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a laceration on the

body

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need

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weeks or maybe months to heal,

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goes

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cosmetic

surgery

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to overdo

this procedures

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because of influence of the social media

such

as

Tik-Tok

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TikTok

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,Facebook and others.

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,beauty standards are high,so many parents encourage their kids under the knife to look more beautiful. In conclusion,anaplasty

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procedure

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good and bad

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both sides.

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nothing wrong

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pretty but

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effects

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one's

body

.