The diagram below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The blow diagram

diplays

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displays

the process of making

cement

and what equipment

are

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is

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used,

next,

producing concrete aimed at constructing buildings

by

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with

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cement

is pictured.

Overall

, it is readily apparent that the final product (concrete) is made of Limestone and Clay,

subsequently

, water, sand and small stones, called Gravel,

also

are added.

Firstly

,Limestone and clay pass the crusher and powder is the result.

Furthermore

, a mixer is in the way

befor

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before

the powder

will be

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is

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heated in

rotating

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a rotating

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heater,

then

grinder

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the grinder

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is the final stage and bags are ready to be filled

by

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with

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cement

after passing that.

Secondly

, in concrete

production

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production,

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it is clear that

final

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the final

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import which is buildings-concrete

include

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includes

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four different

ingredient

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ingredients

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such

as water and sand,

their

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and their

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percentages are 10% and 25% respectively.

Moreover

, the biggest portion of goods is Gravel,

is

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apply

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accountent

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accountant

50%

while

the

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apply

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cement

accupied

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occupied

just 15% of the product. All these materials are added

each

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to each

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other in the concrete mixer.