The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The line graph depicts information about how many commuters ( in hundreds ) were informed about travel schedules by three different methods
such
as face-to-face by mail or letter and telephonically from January to February.
Overall
, when all the figures are taken into consideration, it was seen that the
method
of face-to-face grasped details
as well as
telephonic conversation,
as well as
telephonic conversation, was maximum,
while
letters or email were least popular. As far as the face-to-face
method
is concerned, it began with almost 450 in January and
this
trend showed a continuous rise from starting to the end of a given period and
this
fashion was followed by most of the travellers and reached its peak was 900 information gathered.
Similarly
, in the case of telephonic conversation, it can be witnessed that it initiated from 900 and it took a little dip before sharp growth in the first
month
and
this
figure stabilised for the
month
of March and it showed a dramatic incline and closed at nearly 1600 who get informed in June. Moving towards the rest of the details, as far as the letter or mail
method
is concerned, it commenced from about 715 which was nearly 200 more than the first
method
in January
this
standard retained almost the same position till the end of March
however
it experienced persist decline from March to end of April
this
declining initiated from where it begins and reached on 390 that was the lowest from its counterpart
while
it stabilised for next
month
that was the
month
of May.
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