The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The line graph depicts information about how many commuters ( in hundreds ) were informed about travel schedules by three different methods
such
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as face-to-face by mail or letter and telephonically from January to February.
Overall
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, when all the figures are taken into consideration, it was seen that the
method
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of face-to-face grasped details
as well as
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telephonic conversation,
as well as
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telephonic conversation, was maximum,
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letters or email were least popular. As far as the face-to-face
method
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is concerned, it began with almost 450 in January and
this
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trend showed a continuous rise from starting to the end of a given period and
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fashion was followed by most of the travellers and reached its peak was 900 information gathered.
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, in the case of telephonic conversation, it can be witnessed that it initiated from 900 and it took a little dip before sharp growth in the first
month
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and
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figure stabilised for the
month
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of March and it showed a dramatic incline and closed at nearly 1600 who get informed in June. Moving towards the rest of the details, as far as the letter or mail
method
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is concerned, it commenced from about 715 which was nearly 200 more than the first
method
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in January
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standard retained almost the same position till the end of March
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it experienced persist decline from March to end of April
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declining initiated from where it begins and reached on 390 that was the lowest from its counterpart
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it stabilised for next
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that was the
month
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of May.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as, while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words method, month with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stabilised" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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