The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to s3x and age. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar charts illustrate the genres of
music
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albums
bought by British individuals based on their Use synonyms
age
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Overall
, men's rates of buying Linking Words
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albums
are higher than women's in three Use synonyms
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genres: Pop, rock, and classical.
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of 25-34 have the highest rate of 30%, followed by Use synonyms
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of 35-44—Use synonyms
moreover
, only 10% of individuals within the Linking Words
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Furthermore
, graphs of rock Linking Words
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have slightly the exact same figures as pop Use synonyms
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graphs.
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On the other hand
, people in Britain aged more than 45 purchased around 20% of classical Linking Words
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albums
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ranges of 25-34, who got around 15%. Use synonyms
Age
brackets of 16-24 had the lowest rates for classical Use synonyms
music
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albums
, with only less than 5%, the same as Use synonyms
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of 34-44, which had rates below 5%.Use synonyms
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