The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to s3x and age. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar charts illustrate the genres of
music
albums
bought by British individuals based on their age
and gender. Overall
, men's rates of buying music
albums
are higher than women's in three music
genres: Pop, rock, and classical.
In detail, British individuals within the age
groups
of 25-34 have the highest rate of 30%, followed by age
groups
of 16-24 and groups
of 35-44—moreover
, only 10% of individuals within the age
ranges of 45+ who bought Pop Music
albums
. Furthermore
, graphs of rock music
have slightly the exact same figures as pop music
graphs.
On the other hand
, people in Britain aged more than 45 purchased around 20% of classical music
albums
, followed by age
ranges of 25-34, who got around 15%. Age
brackets of 16-24 had the lowest rates for classical music
albums
, with only less than 5%, the same as groups
of 34-44, which had rates below 5%.Submitted by deckyridho on
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