The diagram below illustrate how recycled paper is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The given diagram elucidates the recycled paper-making
process
. Overall
, the total procedure entails four main phases, starting with forming pulp
and culminating with making paper. The process
requires the use of a number of specialised pieces of machinery and substances, including a filter and chemical agents.
The most interesting feature that emerges from the pulp
-making process
is the main material is actually used paper that is
distributed using a conveyor belt before mixing it with water
and chemical substances. Once it is mixed and turned into pulp
, the pulp
must be filtered.
Regarding the cleaning process
, the filtered pulp
is washed using water
, soap, and air. In this
process
, the ink residues are removed. Having been cleaned, the water
and chemicals are added again to ensure pulp
purity. Lastly
, the cleaned pulp
is poured into a conveyor belt, and the water
is drained using heated rollers. After the pulp
is dried, it forms a roll of recycled paper.Submitted by usedtobesomeoneyoulove on
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