The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart shows what one university’s graduating Anthropology students went on to do after completing their undergraduate degree,
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the table illustrates how much the anthropologists who found jobs earned after 5 years.
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working part-time each only made up a small minority of the graduates, at 8% and 5% respectively.
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who were in the lowest salary bracket of $25,000 to $49,999 both stood at only 5%, versus 10% for those employed in the private sector.Use synonyms
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