The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented line chart displays the
number
of visitors
who attended three different museums
in London, namely the British
Museum
, the Science
Museum
, and the Natural History Museum
, during the summer season of 2013, from June to September. In general, the British
Museum
had the highest number
of visitors
compared to the other two museums
during the summer of 2013.
In June 2013, the British
Museum
had 600,000 visitors
, while
the Natural History Museum
had 550,000 and the Science
Museum
had 400,000 visitors
. In July 2013, the number
of visitors
to the British
Museum
and the Science
Museum
was similar, with both museums
receiving around 350,000 visitors
. However
, the British
Museum
experienced a surge in visitors
in July, reaching a peak of 750,000 visitors
.
Additionally
, the British
and Science
Museum
had the lowest number
of visitors
in August 2013, with 500,000 and 300,000 visitors
, respectively. Moreover
, the number
of visitors
to all three museums
increased gradually in September 2013. During this
month, the British
Museum
had 650,000 visitors
, while
the Science
Museum
and the Natural History Museum
had around 450,000 visitors
each.Submitted by deckyridho on
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