The three pie charts compare the composition of four different meals, namely breakfast, dinner, lunch and snacks, in terms of three nutrients, namely sodium, saturated fat and added sugar.
The three pie charts illustrate the three types of nutrients
such
as sugar,sodium and saturated fat in typical meals
consumed in the USA with instruments in percentages.To begin
with,there are 4 categories for meals
namely breakfast
, lunch , dinner
and snacks
as above.
As seen from the pie charts, Sodium are
the most intake at Change the verb form
is
dinner
with 43% while
breakfast
and snacks
with the same figures at 14% each.As for lunch meals
with 29%.Next,saturated fat and sugar intake in breakfast
also
are the same with 16% each as mentioned but it appears to be higher in dinner
with 37% and 23% , respectively.In contrast
,lower in snacks
with 21% and 42%,respectively.Last
but not least,26% and 23% respectively,in lunch type meals
.
Overall
, consumers tend to take less of all types of nutrients in breakfast
meals
.However
, it is clear that
people take
a large amount Verb problem
consume
in
Change preposition
of
sugars
and Fix the agreement mistake
sugar
sodiums
Fix the agreement mistake
sodium
while
having a
Remove the article
apply
dinner
and snacks
in the USA.Submitted by tifjong on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words meals, breakfast, dinner, snacks with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
▼