the diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feautures and make comparisons where relevant.

the diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feautures and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram presents the manufacturing process of how instant
noodles
are prepared.
Overall
,
it is clear that
,there are 8 steps for making instant
noodles
.It starts
from
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the
flour
,
then
into mixing,cooking,
drying
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and drying
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and ends with packaging the
noodles
by labelling and sealing by the manufacturing company.
Firstly
, a truck full of
flour
poured
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in
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the storage silos for storing the
flour
and it
tracels
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travels
traces
to the mixer , where water and oil are added.The mixer converts into dough sheets for assembling the
flour
and it goes to
dough
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the dough
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strips machine for cutting the
flour
into strips .After that, the strips are arranged and
forms
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up
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into a disc shape.
In addition
,the
noodles
discs are
dippend
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dipped
dipping
in oil and the
noodles
are drying from the oil.
Then
,the vegetables and spices are added
in
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to
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the
noodles
disc and they are ready to pack in the cups.The cups are going to get
labeled
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labelled
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and sealed for
the
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departure from the manufacturing unit.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words noodles, flour with synonyms.
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