the charts give information about two genres of TV programes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia
The bar graph describes how the difference in the preference of TV
programes
depending on gender and age in Australia.
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programmes
programs
Overall
, the rate of the shows that female watches are on a similar trends
in two different genres.
In detail, the percentage of groups watching reality shows indicates an Correct the article-noun agreement
similar trends
a similar trend
upper
trend as their ages become higher. Correct word choice
upward
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female
took place by 70 Fix the agreement mistake
females
percent
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per cent
male
recorded a twofold decrease Fix the agreement mistake
males
by
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in
female
to 35 Fix the agreement mistake
females
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, the number of groups who watch the
game Correct article usage
apply
show
appeared nearly twofold increase than reality shows. In the meanwhile, compared with two different genres, Fix the agreement mistake
shows
age
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ages
from
25-34 Change preposition
apply
as well as
35-44 tend to prefer the
reality shows Correct article usage
apply
than
game shows. Change preposition
to
Also
, age
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the age
about
45+ reached a peak in both two graphs.Change preposition
of about
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