Children
are basically
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, agile and caring. They learn
while
they play. It is generally argued that apart from studying
subjects
,
children
should be
also
given some information about leisure
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like art and music.
In contrast
,
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think that
subjects
like Science and
ComputerFix the agreement mistake
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should be focused
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.
This
essay will
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light on both perspectives and will end up with my personal opinion.
At the onset, Apart from the main
subjects
, institutions should add some leisure activities classes. By doing so,
this
can make the
children
to Change the verb form
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grow their interest and
also
they will get some relief from their actual studies. Not only learning some
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but
also
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getting
engageChange the form of the verb
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in these activities will give them
chanceCorrect article usage
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to enhance
skills.
For Instance
, In Japan, many organizations have a mandatory subject of Music in their subject.
This
allows the kids not only
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a new field but
also
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them to learn
this
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so that they can even perform
this
art in their school function.
On the Other hand
, Many guardians believe that Computer and Science
subjects
are mandatory for each
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, as it has
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own importance. They prefer that these areas should be focused more. In
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era, it is seen that to get in
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career, there are two fields to get
and those areas belong to
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two
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. To Prove it, In
currentCorrect article usage
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time
also
, Many parents in India want their kids to
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a Remove the article
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good success in
scienceCorrect article usage
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and computer
fieldFix the agreement mistake
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. Ergo,
children
are meant to
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many entrance exams regarding
to Remove the preposition
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this
, which will help them to get their
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field line.
To Conclude
,
both fields have
own importance. After adding an activity class in the periods, it will make the
children
enjoy
thisCorrect determiner usage
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classes. I personally think that, after learning
this
subject, many
children
will add an extra skill
inChange preposition
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their career which will enhance their skills
overall
.