The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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process

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how

rain

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rainwater

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is

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collected

and shows the

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of how it is converted into drinking

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Firstly

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, when it rains,the rainwater flows through the drain underneath the houses and

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it goes through a

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filter pipe which allows the

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to be filtered making it clean

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, the next step before it goes for

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treatment, the

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is stored in a

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unit and

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moved to pipe in

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another

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unit where

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fileration

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filtration

takes place.

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, In order for rainwater to become drinking

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, it goes through a

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treatment

where chemicals are added in the

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to filter the

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so

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drinkable.

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, the

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is sent into the pipe leading into the house pipes, which is

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then

known as drinking

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