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The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each category from five organisations.
The given diagram
illustract
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illustrates
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the five
organisations's
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invenstment
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investments
on
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each category that included machinery, building, staff
traning
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training
and research. Generally speaking, the chart shows that most
of
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organisations' amount of money contributed
in
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machinery was small proportionally.
To begin
with, the expenditure
in
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staff
traning
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training
of
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organisation
B is significantly higher
that
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than
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other organisations.
It's
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spending on employee training almost is
the
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double
of
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other
groups'
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.
Moreover
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the money that
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B invested
on
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research is the highest
also
.
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,
Organisation
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D and E invested
relatively
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a relatively
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lower amount
that
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than
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other
organisation
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organisations
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on
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each category.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • investment allocation
  • categories
  • fiscal allocation
  • predominant
  • minimal investment
  • trend analysis
  • outlier
  • forecasting
  • distribution
  • paraphrasing
  • comparing
  • analyzing
  • summarizing
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